Apr 13, 2011

Progress

In Rendering the Human Head I've been rendering a lot of human heads. I thought it would be fun to see my progress. I'm not sure if it's a coincidence or intentional, but one of the models from the beginning of the semester posed for us again today. The image on top is the one I drew at the beginning of the semester,
This is the one I drew today. The nose and neck are too long and one of the eyes seems a bit off, but I still think I've improved. What do you think?

5 comments:

Mark Beckstrom said...

I hope the second one looks more like her.

JanB said...

Well, some peoples eyes are a little off and their necks are too long.
But, a definite improvement!

Ammon said...

That's quite a bit of improvement in one semester. They don't even look like the same person. But, if the focus is solely on the human head, this is one area where there was marked improvement. In the first, the lady's head looks more alienesque. In the second she really looks like she has a human head.

Charlo said...

Definitely improved, unless she was actually a witch... then you might have gotten worse.

Laurie said...

Maybe I'm weird, but there is something cool about the first one, even if it does look a little scary. I like the "looseness" of it. I like the flowing hair in the second one.